BrumalHunter

Greetings, once again. Well, this piece employs as extensive a vocabulary as your previous chapter. (It ended rather suddenly and unclearly - I forgot to add this in my previous ...

Salutations. I see that with the failure of the July Review Day, your novel seems to have suffered the most. Never fear, for I shall free your chapters from the ...

Salutations This is a very sombre poem, but it is nevertheless very well written. You have my condolences concerning the topic. every single time at the alter of ultimatum This ...

Salutations It is Friday and here I am to review your chapter, as promised! I have come to like your writing, and I must say, this chapter is just as ...

Salutations. This really is a short story, but your length is not a problem, seeing as you successfully conveyed your message and theme. It is lacking in some aspects though, ...

Salutations Even though I have only recently begun reading short stories, I am already in love with this challenging and beautiful genre of writing. I have studied what certain claim ...

Fiery Salutations I think it is fitting that my final review as Arcanine go to the author of the first novel I have ever reviewed - indeed, to that very ...

Fiery Salutations This is most definitely a very interesting piece of writing. And if it gives any insight into the engima that is the female mind, I am certain it ...

Fiery Salutations I am extremely grateful that you have actually included a link to where you sing the song - whenever I write a review for lyrics, I lament (that ...

Fiery Salutations Oh, I see you have written part two. It is no less vulgar than your previous work, I think, but you have at least indicated this short story's ...

Fiery Salutations One does not see a script in the Green Room too often, so this is an honour indeed. I must say, your description of this script is quite ...

Fiery Salutations I myself have not yet written a script, but I think the fact that you have challenged yourself to write one (whether because your teacher instructed you to ...

Fiery Salutations I love reading short stories, but so many users of the great and fantastic YWS do not study what a short story really should be, so they neglect ...

Fiery Salutations I am extremely happy that someone has finally decided to categorise their supposed "short story", except that it has several parts, under "Other". And not only that, but ...

Fiery Salutations Right from the beginning, I like the fact that you chose a meaningful topic for your lyrics - so many people choose to write love songs or motivational ...