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Re: Down the Rabbit Hole (Chapter 1: War Times)
Salutations, and happy horrible Review Day! It seems this is to be the first chapter of a novel, eh? Well, the most important thing you should know is that first ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Between Light and Death
Greetings, and a happy horrible Review Day! I am sorry that I must begin my review like this, but this "short" story is everything but short. Now, I have nothing ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Girl at the Register
Greetings, and a happy horrible Review Day! Even at the very beginning of this short story, it is already clear that you are a writer of noteworthy talent. It is ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: One Fury - Chapter 1
Greetings, and a happy horrible Review Day! Before I start the review, I would like to advise you not to post chapters too regularly. As much as we would like ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Blood of Monsters
Salutations. I am touched by this short story. As I was reading it, I was wondering what I would write in my review, but in the end, I was so ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Cullet Castle (Part 2)
Salutations, once again. As I have said I would, I have arrived to review part two of what I ahve already determined to be a short story of outstanding quality. ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Cullet Castle (Part 1)
Salutations. I find it extremely ironic and humourous that the person who started the Green Squid trend is not on the Wicked Squids. It does fit though, because it shows ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Three Short Tales
Salutations. I have very rarely seen a collection of stories posted together here on YWS. I have seen it so rarely, in fact, that this is the first time. When ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 2: (part 1)
Salutations, once again. I am back, and this time to review your next chapter. I am pleased to see you have divided it into parts; the previous chapter was quite ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 1: The Newcomers
Salutations, my dear Buggie! I know I had said earlier this month that I would review your new novel, but I haven't had the time to do so before now. ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Tale of a Charmander (A Pokemon Story) Chapter 2; Blast Castle
Salutations. When first I had seen this in the Green Room, I had decided to review the first chapter first. Now that I have, I can finally review this chapter. ...
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: The Tale of a Charmander (A Pokemon Story) Chapter 1; The Mysterious Charmander and the Hidden Town
Salutations. If only you had been here approximately two months ago... We have a Review Day on the last Sunday of every month, and usually the theme depends on the ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Come Back
Salutations. I ordinarily do not review poetry, but I shall make an exception just because it's you. And I am glad I did make an exception, since this is such ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: La Biesta en Arriaga (or) Maternal Instincts (I can't decide yet :) )
Greetings. Per request, I have arrived to review your short story - and I am very glad I did. Thank you for asking me to review your short story, for ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: No more Sprites for me
Salutations. This short story certainly has potential, and with a little more hard work, it can become a fantastic piece of writing! By saying that I don't mean it isn't ...
Oct 7, 2014