BrumalHunter

Salutations. Okay... murder in the second degree, but murder nevertheless - yikes. What happened to the Legendary Dragon (though almost all dragons are Llegends, mind you) that is supposed to ...

Salutations. Hmm, patience really is a virtue. Not one, but both of the questions I had asked in the previous review has been answered. 1. Do your Pokémon only eat ...

Salutations. The chapters/episodes seem to be getting better as we go along, though there is still much work that can be done to improve them (or rather, improve future works.) ...

Salutations. Well, this chapter/episode is MUCH better than the last one, and at least you rated it appropriately. The battle with the Taillows was interesting, but rather sudden. The chapter ...

Salutations. Unfortunately, I have to agree with everything the other reviewers have said. For starters, the mature content really is unexpeceted. Sure, you rated it "M", but the age restriction ...

Salutations. I have returned! And it is still Review Day - fancy that! No matter, I have come to review, so that is exactly what I shall do. Having read ...

Salutations! Oh, I truly am sorry that this chapter of yours is the only piece of ltierature which still remains in the Green Room, but I promise, it will not ...

Salutations! I apologise that you the author of one of the last two remaining works in the Green Room, but rest assured, they will not remain in here for much ...

Salutations. So, you are YWS' illusive Unicorn of Rainbows and Roses? *bows* It is an honour to finally review one of your works. I must apologise for not reviewing this ...

Salutations, Wolfie! When first you mentioned this short story, I was every excited to read, and I was even mroe excited when you posted the link to it; however, I ...

Salutations. This chapter is rather long, but that cannot be helped. However, if you can shorten it (as in, by dividing the chapter into parts) before submitting it as a ...

Salutations. What immediately strikes me about this chapter is your formatting. I understand your use of indents, since I use them myself, but I think you went far overboard with ...

Salutations. Your story has much potential, but unfortunately, I cannot say whether the direction in which you are sending the story now is the one which logically follows on the ...

Salutations. I quite like your protagonist. While "Skunk" may be a rather odd name, the man has backbone, which is more than his guards has, it would seem. At first ...

Salutations. This is a fabulous piece of writing. There are very few language errors, the imagery is sufficient, and already, I have an idea of what this character is like, ...