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Re: The Meet Cute: Behind The Scenes Edition Part One
Salutations, Kate! As offered and requested, here's your review! ^_^ I checked the other reviews beforehand to see what's already been mentioned. I see some low-level feedback (punctuation, typos, etc
Jun 24, 2024 -
Re: The Last Spell 1.2
Oh, I'm first here? That's actually a little disappointing. Come on, people, two consecutive chapters! These are easy points! *shakes head* Anyway, salutations! No need for formalities. Another few mi
Sep 11, 2022 -
Re: The Last Spell 1.1
Salutations, Silver! I see you've received a few reviews already, but I'm determined to leave a review for everyone who submitted a chapter in the literary section — no exceptions! ...
Sep 11, 2022 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.1
Salutations, Spearmint! The technical side of your writing is on point, so I'll mostly be talking about impressions and the like! I'll start with the title: it's hilarious, and since ...
Sep 8, 2022 -
Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow: Prologue
Salutations, Harry! If I'd waited two more days, this would literally have been my first review in a year! I don't think I'm too rusty, but I nevertheless hope you ...
Sep 8, 2022 -
Re: Rite of Passage
Salutations, Winter! You warned me this would be long, and lo, it actually is! XD I'm hardly afraid of long reads, however, so I read half last night and half ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Pride Month: Definitions and Explanations for (Almost) Everything!
Salutations, Winter! I heard you'd made a list of definitions for Pride Month, so I thought I'd check it out. It's quite comprehensive, so well done! You definitely have reason ...
Jun 27, 2021 -
Re: ~when no one can judge me~
Salutations! This is a beautiful poem. It's, at times, rather difficult to read (intentionally so, I imagine), but after a while, you get used to the formatting — or lack ...
May 30, 2021 -
Re: Swimming, Searching, Standing
Saaaaaaalutations, Wolfe! I'm in need of a poem for my daily review, and the Green Room has sadly been cleared of those. Therefore, I have appeared! I chose you arbitrarily. ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: So, uh, space.
Salutations, Sheyren! I wrote a review for this, but it was crap and submitted prematurely. I refuse to live with that, so here's the second attempt! If you're wondering why ...
Sep 29, 2018 -
Re: So, uh, space.
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Sep 29, 2018 -
Re: A chain breaks at its strongest
Salutations! We both reviewed a work the other day, and I found I quite enjoyed your review. It was well-written and showed sound reasoning. When I scrolled through the Green ...
Sep 28, 2018 -
Re: Beep
Salutations! I love when short works are moving. It shows that you don't need many words to leave an impression on your readers. Of course, I'm massively biased towards writing ...
Sep 26, 2018 -
Re: Constellated
Salutations! *chuckles in equal parts amusement and revulsion (a bit strong, but used for lack of a better word)* With the very first line, I figured this was going to ...
Sep 25, 2018 -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 4
Salutations! Today is Heritage Day, so we have an class-free day! As such, I have ample time to review one of your chapters, although this one is actually shorter than ...
Sep 24, 2018
