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  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Mollie

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    Aug 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: The Stone Man and the Woman Blob

    Hey Redhood! I loved your work, it felt really personal to me.First of all, I really like how the narrator describes the mother at first. It depicts a lot of ...

    Aug 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Technology, General Re: Reliable Sources

    Hello Plume! I found the poem vey interesting. For me, the first two lines caught my eyes. [qoute]You say you asked your friend, ChatGPT--- Well, I asked the pocket prophet ...

    Jul 28, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: room 304

    Hi Leya! I loved your work. Though it's a simple poem, it has a gravity to it. It deals with the traumas of being a doctor right? The saviours. My ...

    Jul 28, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Mera Apna Ghar

    Hello @themangledsoul! Mujhe aapki kavita pasand aayi. Mene kabhi socha nahi thaa ki yaha mujhe koi hindi kavita milegi, parantu yah dekhke mujhe bahut accha laga. Kyuki, yaha "itna khush ...

    Jul 13, 2025
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Veil of the Unclaimed - Somewhere Only I Know

    hi @apersonnn Great work!! But you didn't have to twist the knife at the end. Jk jk ^^ It's beautiful... I travel beyond the veil to my favorite world, I ...

    Jul 8, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: adagio

    Hey @adore, great work there! I just wanna pop in for some review. Don't mind me, I'm new here too ^^ I love the imagery here, It's so vivid! I ...

    Jul 8, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Echo of the Protector

    Great work @Nethmi. Ooh this is mysterious. Is that man like a piece of her mind that becomes reality? My most obvious question should be Is it fiction or psychological ...

    Jul 6, 2025
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Romantic Re: To Live and Die

    Hi @TheRebel2007 ~ Love the lyrics! Though I won't be able to listen to the song how you imagined- it's still beautiful. The lyrics feel like their are saying the ...

    Jul 5, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Fireworks and Fireflies

    Hi there @emilyrebecca, this was a beautiful piece of poetry. I'm not from the states so I might be wrong, but I think it is related to the US inpedependance ...

    Jul 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Wind's Envy

    Hi Julia!! I loved you work! Idk if I interpreted it right or if it was the vision you painted, but I'd still love to share my view ", It ...

    Jul 4, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Too old for a hero

    Thanks for sharing your works, it;s beautiful. From what I percieve, I think it is the head right? I might be wrong- but it resonates to me, and it feels ...

    Jul 4, 2025


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