BrooklynWriter

Wow, I'm speechless.

Oh my God I am so going to die laughing now.

Hey K, This is cute. I do agree with Zib's comment about Rue's personality. She was one of my favorite characters and I don't think you really captured the esscence ...

Kaka, You disapoined me. Some of the mistakes that you pointed out were done on purpose to fit the mood of the story and the girls.

I do like it but I feel it could be improved. For example, I feel you could have used some similies in this case to help readers identify your hardships ...

I do like it but I feel it could be improved. For example, I feel you could have used some similies in this case to help readers identify your hardships ...

I don't kow about the English languace is but the Spanish language is.

The mystery is the whole point.

That was enchanting. It really spiked your intrest. It was one of those things that make you think. Something that makes you ponder. It shows real potential and proves a ...

Thanks Miz I noticed that and was trying to fix it. Now I know how.

That was awesome! It was unique, and cute. My only worry is that it doesn't seem like it will be intense, because the best compnent to a romantic novel is ...

Actually It is chapter one but I just called it Part One.

I can't lie here so.......... 1)The I,Q Series by Roland Smith 2)The Gallagher Girls Series by Ally Carter 3)The Giver by Lois Lowery Not necessarily in that order.

This is for those of you who thought the kiss was too early. The whole point was for the kiss to be early. They had just met. Their eyes locked ...