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Re: Malice
Well, first off, this is quite a good story. My personal opinion is that the mysterious quality that was given by not including some information actually helped the story, but ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Back of Your Hand (Hurricane)
First of all I just have to say that this is an awesome poem. It is beautifully written and is quite easy to read. I especially like the repitition at ...
Jun 9, 2012 -
Re: Mankinds Farewell
This is a well written poem. I liked the description the line "Just remember if all the Worlds seas were ink" because I think it is fairly easily imagined. In ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: The Martyr
This is a really well written poem. It is interesting and I like the description in it. My favorite lines are "in the golden autumn morning. Breathe in the fumes ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Do You See What You've Done?
I enjoyed this poem. I found it quite well written. The poem doesn't have much flow to it because of the punctuation, but it still sounds pretty good. My favorite ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
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I really enjoyed this poem. I especially like the way it flows and the way you described everything in the first part of the poem. My favorite lines in the ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Freedom
That was a wonderfully written poem. I like the description and the way you finished off the poem. My favorite lines are "the branded D on his cheek, burning with ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: A loss so great, it makes thunder cry out
This is a wonderful poem. I found the first few lines amazingly written. I like the way you repeated the first few lines at the end and the effect it ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: echoes
I thought that this poem was amazing. It took me a few times of reading it to understand but it seemed to get better every time that I read it ...
May 31, 2011
