BrokenSkye

I found this to be odd, in good way though. I do have some compliments, and I do have some criticism. First things first, I loved the title and it ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It definitely lived up to it's description! I did have to stop and reread this line: "after they unearth me" It confused me at first, ...

I absolutely loved this. Yes, it was a little dark, but it was straight from the heart. I love everything about it. My favorite line would have to be between ...

I really enjoyed reading this! It is different from most, and that is what makes it so grand. There were two other mistakes that I saw, "When all hope is ...

Okay first thing I would like to say is that you did a great job on this poem. Next thing I would like to say is that it didn't really ...

This poem, I'm not going to lie, kind of scared me. It painted a picture in my head that made me imagen someone boiling their blood than throwing it at ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was different and unique. It had depth and beauty beyond this life. I didn't find a single spelling error, at least when I ...

The first thing I would like to say is that your poem was amazing. It had a lot of rhythm and movement. But there were parts that rhymed then others ...

Okay first thing that i would like to say is that I really enjoyed reading this poem and that I found your writing not only unique, but amazingly beautiful. The ...

First things first, WELCOME TO YWS! Okay, now to get serious. If you look at your work, that was amazing by the way, there are the little number and letter ...

I really love this novel! It is simply amazing. And your writing is beautiful! I don't really read the novels on here because they are too long or they get ...

Okay first thing I would like to say is that I loved your last stanza! It was beautifully written! First stanza was okay. It took me a second to find ...

Hey Courtney, You have a lot of errors in this poem. And instead of writing a nice long review like I normally do I'm just going to show your errors ...

This was a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. The only problem I had with it was towards the bottom where it says 'You know do know this is ...

Okay first thing I would like to say is that your story has a nice structure and main idea. But it lacks details and it seems to go by a ...