Boolovesyou

This is an amazing poem, and I believe that its to far above my abilities to write, to judge. Its really good.

I love it so much I don't want to nitpick it =p

Hello there, Boolovesyou! I hope you are having a good day. ;) Now, I shan't focus on the nitpicks in this short story, because for the most part the users ...

Really cool.

Remember its a format. Some lines you can't change with out going out of format.

Hehe. This makes me think you should be a lesbian. If you have so much against men.

Hum. This doesn't really fallow a poem format. But interesting,

No reason to be nervous . I would do a full review, but I'm a little tired, so I just want to say its amazing keep the good work up.

Oh, Thanks good point. I wasn't sure on the punctuation, because the original barely had any ( I mean the original format ) But I changed it =D.

It is a little sketchy that you are steeling the name of a Green Day song. Other then that I liked it.

I have most definitely learned a lesson from this one : Spend more then 20 minutes on a poem. Heh. Okay im rewriting this.

This reminds my of "The Bells" by Edgar Allen Poe. You should check it out.

This is an amazing poem im a big fan of it =]

Oh and the last line when thing look up. awesome. I wish I could write that well. Putting emotions in to words is not as easy as it looks.

Gotta admit not my type of story, but it was really interesting.