Boolovesyou

Hey, TDMitchell, I know that you probably wrote this awhile ago. I decided I’ll start from the begging! So here I go! But, as one usually does in their sleep ...

Hey Icyflames, I really liked your poem! It doesn't seem forced at all. It flowed really nicely. For as sure as the wind blows, Your lifetime has passed, As sure ...

Hey Taylor, I just don't like this poem. The topic is used over and over. Every rhyme after the original seems really forced like you used a rhyming dictionary for ...

Hey AardvarkSlave, shutting her dark It would help if you said what color. eyes tightly Her cellphone two words from which she had received the news The crackling of her ...

Hey pyro, Oh my God... when I got to the end... I just.... Good job! It was really, really good. I NEVER expected it coming! Your writing was really good ...

Hey Twinseed, 147 words, and everyone of them interesting! I have a suggestions, try splitting it into two paragraphs. It was a bit confusing, and maybe I just didn't get ...

Hey Rayneisthename, I liked the prologue quite a bit other then maybe it wasn’t mysterious enough? 1.) I liked this part, but maybe you could add more about what he ...

Hey Cairo! One grammar issues : She stops shaking. The terror disappates. dissipates I really liked yours. It actually told a story, and I loved it. Things are fine with ...

Hey LostMagi42, His name is Tim, and I am Ariana. I really don’t like when people introduce characters like this in a story. Be creative! We fought long and hard. ...

Hey Rememberme, Start off with a few errors: LIke Like you did the morning of you're death, like you did every morning. You looked like a porcelain porcelain doll, so ...

Hey Gossipgirlxoxo, Okay first off what I noticed by just looking at your story, you need more paragraphs. I personally really don’t like it when people put to much into ...

Hey Boo here! Just some corrections! "come to me now" C in come should be uppercase. I noticed you didn't uppercase anything in your poem so I won't point them ...

Hey. I strongly suggest you change this poem from paragraph form. Also change the font. Its quite annoying... Drifting thru through the tides of something I cannot place, my body ...

I Was Here I Lived I Loved I Cared IGive It My All Space needed. I Did my Best Not Becase Of You Because Becase Of God Because I Am ...

Hey Ignatius5453, I liked you poem. It was just overdone and bland. The topic is just over used. Some of your rhymes are almost rhymes or forced rhymes Look outside ...