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Hey Anna, I really like the poem, I loved it actually. But I do have some corrections and suggestions. She’s running comma Till she sees a line of people standing ...

Hey Painting! Just have a few spelling errors here for you fix! this means hardship and devestation, but also love and togetherness. Devastation Scarlett, she has placed a bit of ...

Hey Cutie, SOO. This poem has a good plot, but it needs more meshing out. Parts don't play out like they did in your head to the reader. I need ...

Hey Cutie, But I think is you get rid of the 'but' it would flow more. Less conjunctions the better. Don't just do it cause I said it. Read it ...

Hey Cailey! I’ll kick this off with corrections! Then, one cold winter day, I think you should make this a new paragraph Haha, this was funny to me anyways. As ...

Hey Priceless, I’ll just kick it off with corrections! He felt prickles all over him comma and knew the neighbors were watching. She sat in the taxi comma and closed ...

Hey Kj, I'll start off with things that need work or fixing! his eyes burned like fire. This comparison was just boring since you've already been talking about fire. beneath ...

Hey Explosive, This is a really well written piece other then the lack of commas, and I think you should split it differently. My lungs are empty, shriveled like popped ...

Hey Kiki, Ah, a nice not intense poem. Thank you. You made me smile when I like in a very bad mood! I also understand waiting for mail. Hah. I ...

Hey Secrets, You have a cute poem here. I don't mean it as a bad thing, but for some reason I think its a cute rhyme. I did like it ...

Hey Shadow, You're the lucky winner of my 3 AM review! Aren't you happy? For the poem, I really liked you message. I completely relate to how you feel, and ...

Hey Goa, First off. I love your poem. Its really nicely written! Congrats. So no complaints about it other then some spelling issues. awkward silence in each other's presance. Presence ...

Hey Urban! She’s sitting on the dark and dusty floor The bathroom stall is filled with the hate inside of her comma But this doesn’t help so she lies to ...

Hey Jackle, I’ll start with the corrections: Russell’s pale comma green jeep was parked on the dirt driveway Then they You mean the black ooze cause you say they kept ...

Hey Justtrying, You have really good grammar and punctuation, and I can't say that to many so congrats! I liked the poem I only had one concern, and its not ...