BookWolf

No problem! :D And I agree, I find being myself while writing is way easier. And definitely more fun. :D

Okay, so I finally caught up on which chapter you're on. :D And I have to say this story is going great. You have a really good storyline and I'm ...

Lol :D :D :D :D :D

Thanks for the review! :D I totally see how you think a few of my sentences are weird, and I'll definitely correct this again some time. Maven's eyes are actually ...

No, I love your smiley faces! :D And I agree, there should be a comma after fourteen. I'm glad there aren't any typos actually, that means I'm getting better... Right? ...

You are truly awesome! :D I got on here and you noticed that you are just destroying my portfolio! Thanks ever so much! :D Again, you're the best.

Wow! Great description. Well, I was GOING to review this, but apparently KatGirl found all the mistakes I wanted to point out. :D Oh well. Anyway, this is a really ...

That was awesome! :D Especially the last stanza. I loved it. Everything went smoothly and it left me wanting more.

So, here I am, reading chapter 4 and enjoying it just as much as the others. You are truly an amazing writer. :D I'm loving Nadia so far, great personality ...

That was awesome! Truly amazing. You are obviously a gifted poet. :D My favorite part was the second stanza; No walls of concrete before us stood, But barriers of gazes ...

Aw! Thanks! :D And I'll make sure to check out some stuff of your stuff too.

Thank you so much for the review! :D I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Maven is the MC, which I think would be pretty obvious if you had read the ...

Not even gonna review this, just gonna say how awesome this is. :D It is so true and so mind blowing for people who didn't know this stuff (Which I ...

Haha! Thank you for the review. I'll make sure to "Let it flow! Let it flow!" :D

Thanks for this review and I appreciate all your suggestions! :D I'll definitely change the words around and try to make it better. And yes, I trust YWS a lot, ...