BondGirl007

Hey there Nova! First off welcome to YWS and a quick word of advice the more reviews you do the more likely people are to review your work ;). So ...

Hey Pen, well there's not much I can say here, Hippie got to it first, and I agree with most of the things he said. What I suggest is slow ...

Hey BD! Alright, so first off if I say anything mean, don't take it personally, this is meant to help improve your writing, and if I sound mean I'm not ...

Alright, I'm going to make this quick, and to the point since it's late, so if I come off as harsh, I'm not meaning to be. So first off you ...

Hey Speakerskat! This is adorable, I must say :) It reminds me of the millions of fables and fairy tales I used to read when I was younger. The best ...

Hey Classy! I saw you had just posted this and I was in a reviewing mood, so here I am! So, first off I really like the idea, it reminds ...

Hello Rocky dear, I'm here as you asked. Now I'm not at all a religious person, but I didn't find it too bad, a little too christian for my taste, ...

Hey Dreams :), back here for the second part! So in the beginning while reading from the beginning to the part where they leave the apartment, I got the impression, ...

Okay Amy, I'm doing it! So all and all it's a pretty good poem, I like it. It wasn't all that bad for being a rhyming poem :P. You work ...

Hey Jasmine! First off, next time you use the Will Review For Food thread, just remember not to ask too many people. For me it makes me want to not ...

Kammie! Congrats you get my one hundredth review! But I have a feeling it's not going to be a very helpful one, since this, as everyone else said is great ...

Hey Gene! SO this is pretty good for not being a poet, but one of the main things I have to say with rhyming poetry is that a lot of ...

Hi Fiction! It's very short, and I don't get much from it so I don't think it really belongs in Narrative, since Narrative poetry is all about telling a story. ...

Hey Hawkie! This is a cute poem, I know I myself have felt like this at times. I totally agree with June about the last part of the poem. I ...

Hey Forest! I've been reviewing a lot of your poetry lately, and you're pretty good once you get away from cliches and repetition. Those, I think are your two biggest ...