BondGirl007

First off welcome to YWS! I hope you like it around here, meet some friends, read some of our great writers, and review some good works :D. Wow. I have ...

Hey Ol! Well, it's a little on the short side, but that's okay, but you might want to try putting it into separate stanzas. It makes it easier to read, ...

Sorry it took so long for me to get to this Celtic, but I'm here now :D. Well first off it's way to quick, I want to hear about all ...

Well I love the title, but the thing is, that right now it seems like more of just a basic synopsis of Goldfinger. I want more showing, not telling, right ...

Hey Jas! Thanks for asking me to review :D. Alright so the whole first paragraph kind of turned me away from reading, it was just so...cliche, and the repetition of ...

Hey Lala! First off you do a great job with this, I could really see what was happening in the story in my head while reading it. There are a ...

First off, you said that you still had another 200 words or something like that right? So what I recommend is adding a little detail into the story. Right now ...

She walks like a poisoned rose; This I think is the best line in the poem, it's really the only one that gives us an idea without directly stating it, ...

Alright Ellie! Here we go... beautiful plucked strings calm audiences for some it's the prettiest music they heard This whole stanza to me, it's just ehh. You say it's the ...

Hey Skins! Well I think you're doing a pretty good job of moving the story along, and keeping it pretty interesting. Every one's pretty much covered everything. One thing though, ...

Oh Ellie...Where do I start?... Well first off, I thought the beginning was sounded sort of myth like, and that was fine. But then it turned from that into a ...

Hey McDreamy! Thanks for the review request :). So the first thought I had about it was that it was kind of boring. Your style is great, but just the ...

Alright...I'm going to give it to you straight. You need a lot of work. You've got some great story ideas, and you do a good basic outline, but there's a ...

Howler... Jeez where do I begin... You've got a pretty good subject, but you turn it into a self centered kind of repetitive rant type thing. It's just you saying ...

Heya Skins! As said before you really have a way of drawing me into the story, which is great! The things I would suggest to you is that you introduce ...