BondGirl007

I think this is a pretty awesome story and I love that it's the other side of Ellie's story. I really love seeing both sides of rivaling characters, and their ...

Hey Howler! I recently did something almost exactly like this, listening to music then having the urge to write your own type of lyrics/poem thing. So wooo for us cool ...

Okay I didn't actually mind it too much for it being a "oh they broke my heart" poem. Not at all the most original poem ever, but if you do ...

So really there's not much real poem to this. It doesn't make me feel anything, it's too telling and not showing us anything, and it's a little bland. You want ...

Okay, so I'm not exactly sure what this poem is all about...I'm kind of lost to the meaning and what it's trying to accomplish here. It has something to do ...

Hey King! I actually like this poem, it's not bad, and has a pretty cool concept. I agree somewhat with Knightly, it doesn't have much really interesting word play, or ...

Darn it Classy! I'm this close to crying right now...I don't cry. It was the ending that got me...It's beautiful. Really emotional, and beautiful. I love the way that the ...

Giving the wrench one last good turn to the right , the pipe came lose and fell to the bottom of the cabinet. Wait, I'm having childhood flashbacks...what happened to ...

Hey Hawkie! I haven't seen you around in a while! :D Well first off I can't even begin to think of how many where I am from poems I've read/reviewed, ...

The rough rust of the chains scraped at my interlocked wrists, making blood run down my arm. It dripped on to my shoulder, and it made me more aware of ...

Hi there Nightmare! Bond here with a few quick edits! My tormentor slammed his booted foot onto my head, squeezing it into the loose dirt. Okay so at first reading ...

Hey Ember! Thanks for the PM! Now this chapter/scene is so far the one I have the most nitpicks for. Like I have no idea how much time has passed ...

Okay, so you've got some pretty thorough critics, so I'm just going to say a few quick things that I think need to be fixed, and forgive me if they've ...

Okay, well since this is almost exactly like the other story I reviewed I was wondering are they connected? Is Horror the title or something? I thought you were just ...

Hey there Jas! I noticed this didn't have any reviews, so I thought I'd change that :D. Bland brown eyes, average brown hair, not too tall, not too short, nothing ...