BondGirl007

Hello there! I'm just going to jump right in, so here goes! You opened very well, the first two sentences really drew me in and I thought "the heat of ...

Hey there Prizm, Hope here to drop you a review! So to begin with I'm no expert in poetry, these are just thoughts on how the poem makes me feel ...

Oooooh, it's getting more intense! “It’ll take a lot more than you and me to give Resnick his own treatment,” I know what you mean, but 'his own treatment' just ...

Back for more! And this is where everything starts going down, I'm getting excited! staring ahead at the hut. You already described another character as staring at the hut, try ...

Hey again, no intro jumpin right in this time! So I like how you describe Karl, he is another character I see as being bad, but also quite a good ...

Back again! I just want to say that I'm not great with grammar, my reviews are based purely on how the story sounds/flows/feels when I read it. So if you ...

Hey there, Hope here for review #2! So again with the confusing pronouns: He couldn’t believe what he’d just heard. I honestly can't tell who you're talking about here, Nate ...

Hey there, Hope here to review! So let's jump right in! I did read all of your chapters up to this, so I'm caught up on the back story and ...

Hey there I'm Hope and I'll be your reviewer today! Let's begin! So you started out strong, the first stanza is funny but sad; it's relate able. I could easily ...

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Hey there! My name's Hope and I'll be your reviewer today! This is my first review after a long long YWS hiatus so I'm probably a little rusty, so forgive ...

Hiya Boo! Hope here to review! (hey look at that I should be a poet ;)) Hand in hand, Heart to Heart, No command, Affection from the start. I don't ...

Hey there Dudette! First of all yaaayyy! I needed to review something really badly, but a lot of the time unless someone asks me to I just sit around looking ...

So I was all like "Yessss awesome review almost complete, everything's all quoted and formatted and it's almost done." Aaaaand then my computer crashes, and since I don't feel like ...

Hullo Love, how are we today? Hope here to give you a review before I run off for the day! The crowd loudly clapped for me. I wondered, How is ...