Blueprincess96

I think, yes you should keep writting, is a beautiful poem you wrote. Keep writting you do it well.

Good story, and you get better the part of describing good work but I thing you get a mistake in[quote][/quote]but more than that good work.

Good story, I hope you continue writing good topic, I would love to read next one.

I do think its a really beautiful story buy you need more description to help the readers get more involved on the story thats all

I Think you really did a good work and yes you should work on those mistakes but personally I think is a good story and I would love to read ...

I think you write good, how you describe the old women ,and other things is really nice keep doing like that but I did felt a little lost in some ...

Good story but really I think you should describe Cricket a little more like telling a brief summary of what happen to her, or how does she look more profundly ...

What a beautiful poem is just wonderful how you captured your friends feelings. keep working that hard, you have a great talent