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Re: I Wish I Was A Dog
It's all good. :D
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: I Wish I Was A Dog
Thank you! :D Corrects: **there Hehe. Just had to point that out. :D
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: The Girl with Freckles
:O The stanzas are uneven. *looks below at another review* Did someone already say that? Never mind, then. Great poem! :D :D
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: I Wish I Was A Dog
I just added a stanza, I don't know if it's any good though. :D
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: I Wish I Was A Dog
Thank you for your review. Although, some of the things you said I may disagree with, like why being a dog is cool. Don't you think it's a great experience ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: I Wish They Forgot About Me
Me too. But to fix that problem, you have to put in a . , - or ~ in the space that separates the stanzas. :D
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: In your eyes...
Great! :D
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: In your eyes...
Very touching, Eros. Like to see more of your works posted up here. :D
Jul 2, 2015 -
Re: Senseless Hope
You're welcome. And I think that the shortness of this poem is fine. :)
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: Happy Father's Day
Thank you, CaptainSalty, for the review. Adding more detail to my poem has definitely been mentioned before. This isn't one of my best poems, so I may not add more. ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: i think it's crazy
Thank, Strange. :D I know, this wasn't one of my best pieces. When I get to it, I'll fix those nitpicks that you mentioned. ;)
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: i think it's crazy
Thank you. :D
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: i think it's crazy
;) Right on it, Prakash.
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Deaf
I didn't know this could make people cry. :D If I remember, I might read your stories, though I normally just read poems. If I do, I'll try. :)
Jun 25, 2015 -
Re: i think it's crazy
Thank you ^-^
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