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  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: I Wish I Was A Dog

    It's all good. :D

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: I Wish I Was A Dog

    Thank you! :D Corrects: **there Hehe. Just had to point that out. :D

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Girl with Freckles

    :O The stanzas are uneven. *looks below at another review* Did someone already say that? Never mind, then. Great poem! :D :D

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: I Wish I Was A Dog

    I just added a stanza, I don't know if it's any good though. :D

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: I Wish I Was A Dog

    Thank you for your review. Although, some of the things you said I may disagree with, like why being a dog is cool. Don't you think it's a great experience ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Wish They Forgot About Me

    Me too. But to fix that problem, you have to put in a . , - or ~ in the space that separates the stanzas. :D

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: In your eyes...

    Great! :D

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: In your eyes...

    Very touching, Eros. Like to see more of your works posted up here. :D

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Senseless Hope

    You're welcome. And I think that the shortness of this poem is fine. :)

    Jul 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Happy Father's Day

    Thank you, CaptainSalty, for the review. Adding more detail to my poem has definitely been mentioned before. This isn't one of my best poems, so I may not add more. ...

    Jun 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i think it's crazy

    Thank, Strange. :D I know, this wasn't one of my best pieces. When I get to it, I'll fix those nitpicks that you mentioned. ;)

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i think it's crazy

    Thank you. :D

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i think it's crazy

    ;) Right on it, Prakash.

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Deaf

    I didn't know this could make people cry. :D If I remember, I might read your stories, though I normally just read poems. If I do, I'll try. :)

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i think it's crazy

    Thank you ^-^

    Jun 25, 2015


The very worst use of time is to do very well what need not be done at all.
— Benjamin Tregoe