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Hey hey hey! Thanks for reviewing my work! Pointing out that I had called them the Guard and then called them the Squad--thanks! I originally called them the White Lion ...

I'm simply saying that Script Format is lazy if you're not doing it for a script. It's a lazy writing style for a book, compared to the regular format for ...

OKAY, FORGET ABOUT THE CREATURE MORPHING I just changed it because I just made a plan for chapter five.

Hey there, Wolfie! Finally got around to reviewing this chapter, I see. Thanks for pointing out that it's confusing for me to keep changing paragraphs then saying "he". I'll be ...

Hey! Thank you so much for reading this and commenting on this. First off--(Speaking my thoughts on Visermann & Senri) I'm not sure if I'm actually going to make Visermann ...

Thanks for the offer! I dunno, I may take you up on that. But, I may not need to--because Edmond's thing is throwing knives. I use 'em, and I also ...

Oh, and, to cap off the resemblances--David and I are opposite genders.

First off, thank you so much for reviewing my story! Grammar Errors Thanks for pointing out the "taught" thing! I didn't notice that--must've been when I was writing on my ...

First off, thank you very much for this review! Okay, so in the description of the courtyard, I can't really figure out how to put it into more detail without ...

Thank you for the review! Good to know that you enjoyed this chapter much more. I will admit--I put a lot more time into this chapter than I did the ...

OHHH! It's a rule I was taught a while back. If you can say a sentence without "and"--even if you need to split it in two--you should. Or, if you ...

Thanks for this review! It's okay, though you did come off harsh--I'm fine with that. I have to work REALLY hard to not come off as harsh or mean when ...

Sure, I'd love to explain it to you! Which ones were they again? I just read through my review and I can't seem to find the changes I made that ...

Thanks for reading this, Felista! So, everyone tells me that I should be adding more overview on my world. XD I understand that I should have more of it, it's ...

Hey, Jay here, your friendly neighborhood critic! So, I'm not very good at poetry. . . I don't do much poetry--if I ever write one, it's going to be a ...