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Re: Umbra
Hey! This was a very good short story! I loved the good imagery and I felt like I could see what was going on first hand! The only thing I'm ...
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Re: Chapter 1/2 - Letters From Lisa
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Sep 17, 2015
I like this I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really ... -
Re: Tryal's Curse 4.2
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Re: The Curers Quest chapters 1 2 3 4 5
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Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
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Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1
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Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 2
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Re: Return of Magic Part One Capter Four:A Street Performance Goes Horribly Wrong pt. Two
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Re: Removed
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Re: The Profane Parables and Other Nihilistic Narrations by a Perverse Pariah, 4
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Sep 16, 2015
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. this is innnnntttteeeeeerrrrreeeeessssstttttiiiiiiiinnnnnnngggggggggg. idk what to think of it. It was a bit long in my opinion. though writing can rarely be to -
Re: Language Is Just A Word
I don't exactly know what to think about this piece... I like it in a weird (but not bad obviously) way. The comment I have for you is to make ...
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Re: Powerful Minds
This is very interesting. It is very short and packed, kind of like a dream, and I like it!!!! I wish that you had developed some of the details a ...
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Re: Hey, Dad.
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Re: The Other Girl
Hey, camillefalgout! Welcome to YWS! Pssst! I'm new here toooooo. I hope you will check out my short story and comment on it! Anyway, this was really good! It was ...
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Re: Not At Home In This Depot
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Sep 16, 2015
This is a hilarious piece that has just enough sarcasm and just enough hilarity to make someone's day. La la la la la la la. It makes me want to ...