Bloodlord

Hello, @Unforgettable--Bloodlord here to review your work! First off, welcome to YWS. This is a beautiful piece to begin your time in this community! What I liked... This is a ...

Hello Dani 965-- Bloodlord here to review your poem!! This is a very nice poem and a very beautiful way to describe the power of books. As readers read the ...

This is a really nice poem. It depicts multiple aspects of life and meaning from a perspective that is simultaneously despondent, worrisome, and hopeful. We often find ourselves in different ...

This poem is very poignant, human, and beautiful. I like how you took the speaker's career as a club secretary, dissected the job, recognized and explored dehumanization, and applied this ...

Hi, concord. Bloodlord here for a review! This poem is very interesting. You imagery and metaphors are great - "Light knocks on my window", "the sun is too eager to ...

Hi, magiccharm2002! Bloodlord here for a review... This poem is very beautiful, heartfelt, and certainly relatable for many (myself included). You convey this confused, apathetic, and almost empty men

Hi, woahhitherepal! Bloodlord here to review your work... This is a really great poem! The themes that you explore in this poem translate into the structure of and delivery of ...

Hi; Bloodlord here for a review! This piece was quite interesting, and you have mastered description and depiction very well. I feel like I can understand Sognore pretty well after ...

Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! First off, welcome to YWS! This is a great poem, and a great start to your time in the community! You convey chaos well ...

Hello; Bloodlord here for a review! This is an interesting poem, and the scene you depict is very beautiful. You evoke the senses well and your imagery is great! Punctuation ...

Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! I think this is a great poem, and you paint very nice images with each of your lines. I have a few suggestions regarding ...

This is a very interesting poem, and I think you convey the stage well. There are just a few ideas I have to make it a little stronger. First, I'm ...

Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! Your inclusion of several different forms of water - 'tides', 'seas', 'hurricane', 'flood', 'ocean', etc. - create a cohesive metaphor expressing the speaker's torment

Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! This was a really well-written, touching piece! It reflects a very true aspect of friendship that is often hard to accept, and I can ...

Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! I just read the first nine chapters of this book, and I absolutely love it! This was a great chapter, and the last sentence ...