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Chewing on your thoughts for now. I really loved the edits you made, though, and how it added the urgency you talked about. Your point about adding more frustration is ...

So! This isn't really a review, because I would have a very difficult time telling you how to express such personal feelings but.... So, there is a somewhat odd (and ...

My appearances on YWS tend to be pretty sporadic, but if I see you I'll try and reach out, cause your whole Eureka moment intrigues me. And yee, I wanted ...

This a lot to chew on, and I'mma start chewing, even if I might not be able to swallow it all for awhile. There are a few things tat strike ...

Sorry, that came off far more rude than funny, which my just-awakening head thought it was. I just have a cringe at the general idea of that advice for reasons. ...

Also, in terms of punctuations, I would just like to remind you to add periods, commas, dashes, colons, or semi-colons at the end of a line or a stanza. no

Thank you for the comments! I realize the I(s) were a bit inconsistent. The main reason was I was trying to use capitalization on them to show voice. The first ...

The meter comments were in no way overboard, and I really appreciate the depth you put into it. I actually posted this to get some comments about the flow and ...

yes i agree 100% i am not being blackmailed for sure

Writing is my passion.

thank

Yes. Yes I am.

so i herd u liek mudkipz /necessary meme

Well....this is an...interesting welcome post. Hi.

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