Blink

(Fix that atrocious spelling error in the title. =P ) Hey! Nice to meet you. I'm Blink. ^^ Feel free to introduce yourself in the welcome forum. We don't bit. ...

Hello. ^^ One thing that really stood out for me was the random swearing. I really don't think it's necessary; instead of sympathising with this character, I am instead wondering ...

Aqua Marine. Hello. ^^ Couple of things: remember that capital letters at the start of every line is actually not how it should be done. =) It follows the same ...

Hey. Let me have a look at this for you. ^^ my halting breath quickly made the small enclosed space stifling. While I like the opening paragraph, this stands out ...

Tammy. Nuuuuuuu. You're slaughtering grammar, and not in a good way. You see, sometimes people will avoid the strict rules - Cormac McCarthy doesn't use dialogue marks, will avoid things ...

Hello. Blinkster here. Everyone knows the saying "It feels so right when it's wrong." But what about "It feels so wrong when it's right?" They are the same thing. I ...

Heya! I'm so sorry about how long it has taken to get to this. I've done so many exams and hikes and stuff. But hopefully, this will still be helpful ...

Hey, magnus. =) I have a little spare time, so here we go. The first thing I noticed was that you seem to be overdosing on adjectives and adverbs, when ...

Hello. =] I'll keep this brief because I'm supposed to be working. ^_^ A snowy winter plain lay under the starry night sky. Bright stars seemed dwarfed by the more ...

Heya Demi! Don't think I've read anything of yours in a very, very long time. I need my occasional dose of insanity, yah? (This won't be much of a critique ...

Now, I'm feeling ruthless. Remember that YWS has a 2:1 review to submission ratio, so please, do some reviews. If you need any help there, just drop me a line. ...

'Allo, Blinkster here for critiquing. =) I made her swear not to use it... but who can be sure? MY AWESOME SISTER! Rain pelted my face as... I don't know ...

Okay, hello. =] This is looking a little lonely, so I'll give it some company. still unmoving person Both these adjectives mean the same thing; you could down from six ...

Hey Serendipity! Can just say, I think your name is brilliant. =] By the way, in case you didn't know, YWS does have a rule in that for every piece ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'll go through the stanzas individually and show you my thoughts. PM me with any questions. =] I wonder if he's ever told a lie or ...