Blink

Hullo, there, Wolf! Here by request. :) Looks like an interesting poem! I'll go through each line and give my opinion and such. Life is a ship: follow no map ...

Hello, yes, hello there. Mind if I take a look? I thought not. =) I walked through the overgrown brush, kicking anything in my way. Weird. Firstly, why would he ...

Before I start, don't expect this review to be especially helpful. xD Right, anyhow. This was good fun to read, but it feels sort of too much like a descriptive ...

Hello. Thought I might review something of yours today. ^_^ Just a quickie--be sure to do two reviews for every submission you make! Then you can guilt people into reviewing ...

Alright, this is very short and so I won't be able to offer much on the story, but, my strong points are openings so let's see where that takes me. ...

Hey :) This thread looks lonely and it's been a while since I've read something of yours. Hmm, well, I'm not entirely sure what to say. That was a wonderfully ...

Hello RockGoddess! Nice to see a new face around here! Just in case you didn't know, it's a a rule around here that you must do two reviews for every ...

Heya Kylan. The room he is in is dark, except for an arrangement of tired candles set up on the window sill. This is fine, but I think it's a ...

Yo, Jared! Here by request: so I couldn’t read her lips. Ash, who rarely talked anyway, barely moved his lips, so they were virtually unreadable. As said, this could so ...

Hello =) Remember me? I never really did pay you back for all those great crits you gave me aaages ago. Anyhow, moving on... I feel like I'm going to ...

Hello. ^^ I won't be commenting on punctuation/repetition nitpicks since they can often be found through a quick proofread; just watch out for things like excessive exclamation marks, and repeating ...

Hello, again. =) Just before the mods tell you, I thought I'd remind you about the 2:1 ratio, thing. You'll want to do a few reviews so you don't get ...

Hey Lucy, welcome! Why not head over to the community area and introduce yourself? Just in case you haven't been told, YWS does ask that you do around two reviews ...

Hello. she had tried so hard to bury, suppress forget. There should an "and" after "suppress. Elated, she pumped her arms, Having read through, I get the impression that "elated" ...

What do you mean you don't have any reviews? That will not do! I lay on the back of my arm and hung my head upside down allowing the wind ...