Blackwood

and unfortunately the whole entire re-write you did will not work XD the character is blind. Also the violin was in the case.. why wouldn't it be. And also sound ...

And the character is a boy sjdfvdsjbfvkdsjvdfv

I am really confused about the grey text thing, I am sure I didnt put grey text in and I highlighted it and set it all to black, fiddling with ...

Thanks dude :D, you did your review a little bit early for review day if that's what you were aiming for but the advice was great anyway.

No 50 points for you

You are right about that comma, I'll go and fix it up now, and I do admit I think i put in too many dots, I wasn't really thinking i ...

I am a poet, how does writing bad poetry get on my good side?

It took me about three reads to actually understand what this said.

I am indecisive on whether something in this story has been named after me...... or that it is more than a coincidence.

Just because.

I just saw a good example maybe tremolo instead of trembling or something.

Cow loves it, that's why.

What is whitewood even?

He just doesn't want to understand....

As in OK I'll apologize now.... sorry...