Blackwood

A soft breeze ruffled the grass as a crow landed on a wooden beam and alerted 12-year-old Sammy Conners to the black bird watching her from its perch on the ...

Love it. Simple and sweet. the rhyming scheme is great too. I am a bit wary about the : on the third line, its not a list, did you mean ...

Lovely rhyming. Great rhythm untill I got to this line. What more could you want? I am your stylish new font. all of a sudden it felt like a stop ...

Instantly before I even start reading this I see is lacks stanzas and punctuation. You need both of these things, no exception. It stands alone as a block of text, ...

I do like this, but at the beginning it seems like she is a bit suicidal. I see witches as strong/powerful and independent which seems contradictory to whats happening to ...

This was a good poem, but I would watch your descriptions. and I could feel blushes of orange growing in my throat, Blushes then of orange on the next line ...

Great job the imagery is incredible. I am curious as why a belly button is a black abyss? It sort of gives me a creepy image. I have a couple ...

This poem was truly a piece of art. I am slightly curious as to the second to last stanza. and Frank is smoking outside again, pouty lips curling around his ...

I actually read this a while ago and I am not sure why I did not review it back then. The fact that I read it for enjoyment and not ...

At first I was a little bit put off because everything I read seemed to echo 'The hobbit'. Dwarves, beards, mountains. It has been too many years since I read ...

Nice poem here. I may do each line by line. This is my story and this is my life. This first line has nice rhythm. It introduces the poem and ...

First thing first. Gwyn is a girls name. Nothing you can say will change that for me. "I, eh, I am not...really..a mage," he confessed, but couldn't help but look ...

In a way, he is quite beautiful, she thought as she watched a boy crossing the street. I do not think this is a powerful opening sentence. What is she? ...

Here is a review. When I read this I get a feeling of frustration. Why? because I see the name Jamie at the top and I realize that I must ...

This is old but it deserves a review anyway. Firstly because: It is the only thing in this magical "art" section which I didn't even know existed and I have ...