Blackwood

Hey buddy. Some lyrics here I see. They weren't bad. And when I say not bad I mean not bad, as in they are not horrible or not bad. But ...

Don't review you say? Well.... SURPRISE BUSTER! You have some interesting stuff here, but what I am concerned about is how you are writing a particular section near the beginning. ...

If I'm going to read this I might as well review, even thought its so old. I'm always happy to get reviews no matter how old my things are, so ...

I'm going to give you my honest opinion, and that is that, unfortunately, I found this horribly clichéd and ultimately boring because of this? Why? Well you just have to ...

Welcome to YWS madame. I see this is your first work on the site, so congratulations on taking the first step on becoming a full fledged member! I don't often ...

To be honest. I didn't really like it because it didn't flow very well. I couldn't feel a poetic rhythm and in general it didn't seem to have any direction. ...

Review for you my friend, review for you. First thing first, your first sentence and already commas too many. This comma is not only not necessary but also make it ...

I should review this just because it's amazing and I didn't review any of your chapters and also because I have an exam in the morning and I just need ...

Ok before I review or even read this I ran it through the E checker for you. You have 6 accidental e's so you are going to need to fix ...

Hello, review time. I both gulp and rub my hands together at the sight of him. This ins't the best way of putting the sentence, as it makes the reader ...

I understand that English must be your second language. I think you need to work on improving your English a bit more before you start writing long works of fiction ...

I read this one and the last one and I was thinking about how fun it was to read and how easily your writing flowed. It was simple but it ...

I remembered your small sadness about not getting any reviews for this, so I really hope I don't disappoint you. I'll make sure I get this in before someone who ...

Company and Solitude. A poem written by yourself, unfortunately I feel it doesn't really make an impact on the reader. It's simply not powerful and lacks a real essence. I ...

I see you have written a poem. This poem is very indecisive with its rhyme scheme. You keep changing them scheme every stanza or so, and I don't think it's ...