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Blackwood

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Scotch

    Hey there. Why is this is poetry? It is most certainly a short story. First thing I noticed was this: I can hear and it is heard when it wishes ...

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Other Re: Son of a Killer ch2

    Good evening! I have read this second chapter now. A quick question I have for you is that did you change the kids being killed to being segregated? As an ...

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Politics Re: knots

    Punctuation baby They line up bricks and stencil walls that say , “conundrum of politics . ” I guess I’m to simple of a person to understand , but I ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: stars

    What was I saying before? Sexy poet. Here is a proper review. You have a good way with words, nice flow, and a voice which is great for a poet. ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Son of a Killer ch1

    Hey there, you have some nice writing style here but before much is said about that I just want to point out something to you. I am mainly basing this ...

    Sep 5, 2013
  • » Re: Little Chimney (Draft)

    Looks like your image code didn't really work out, oh well, that's not the important part anyway. Firstly, before I sing you songs of praise, I would like to inquire ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: "Vicky...Not so Icky?" Part Two.

    I'm just going to keep on reading because they're so entertaining. I found the end a bit strange though? Why would Vicky play hide and seek? I expected him to ...

    Aug 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Hidden in a Lie Prologue

    Looks like you had a bit of a formatting problem with the publishing center. You may want to go have another shot at fixing it up. Now, your writing seems ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Jerry

    Hey buddy, here to review. I like the opening paragraph, in the car, it makes sense and flows along nicely, yet I suddenly stop and get confused. The country club ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Society Wins

    Hello hello. I will give you a review. It took me a little bit to get into this, but by the end I was satisfied with your idea you have ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Amy.

    Hello, review for you. I read this when I saw the name of some instruments, hoping that if you were a non musician I could catch you out and give ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: I Wanted

    I like the irony, and I do admit, you do touch on a big cliche at the end. I think that personally, you should have wrapped it up humorously, getting ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Death Through Boredom

    hey there. I really liked this poem and I think you pulled it off well. I am sad that you didn't take the chance to use the word shame as ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Savior

    Hey there. the imagery in this is really great and full to the brim. It may be slightly overwhelming at times. i think that if you you put in more ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: Psychohomichlophobia

    I really like this, the use of long words which slowly become more and more crazy, then finally merging the scientific with some religious proclamations really makes an impact. I ...

    Aug 25, 2013


I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin.
— David Eddings