Bjorn

I already made a topic for discussing the LotR, or at least why people foudn it too straining, in the Lounge I believe. After that I don't know what you ...

As long as you liked it, and ya, LotR can't be beat! It's a sonnet, and a petrachan, so there is a certain rhyme scheme, and each line must be ...

So: feathers gleam in moon(without the 'the'[and I won't say naught about that, this is poetry!] *pause* pale light?

Good, good! But shouldn't it be: pale moonlight, as opposed to moon-pale light? Unless it's supposed to be read another way?

Thank ye!

Things I was aware of, yet unsure of. I actually had a fight with myself with the spelling of graceful (bleh), but thank you! As for 'rainment' I meant 'raiment', ...

I understand ^^;

Thank you.

Maybe a comma before sigh, or just swap another word for it (unless the people are the ones sighing) Not bad; and I like it. Personally I'd call it-Smack, Crack, ...

*Tips hat* But whats so sweet about it? The cold was burning and the frost biting when I came up with the poem...

Yes, well the question mark is there bcause I wasn't sure 'Lost' was a good title. Hehehe... (Thank yea all again, is there no other criticism?!)

I hope you aren't all saying this because everyone else is... I prefer the truth. Otherwise, if these praises are in fact the true feelings of each individual, I say ...

Thank you! And this from 'The People's Poet' raises my morale!

There is a Usergroup, and I would be glad if you joined.(and any other Tolkien fan that sees this!)

I think, that, perchance thou art too harsh :o If it were the way you explained, no book could compare to it! :? However, there are many great reads, and ...