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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Daring Frankie: Demon in the closet

    "I love you mom," says a frazzled young Carrie crawling into her bedsheets. I walk over to my daughters bed with the biggest smile I can manage upon my face. ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Stalking Thought

    Silence Fills my room. Confusion You must assume. Regret Reminds me of the past. Doubt That this won’t last. Haunt Is what it is. Forget Is what it needs. My ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Lesson in Dying

    The first strike knocks me down. I choke, tasting blood as it froths in my mouth-- even the clouds blur together, shuddering as another blow comes and rattles my bones; ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mama, wake up!

    “Mama, wake up.” Jasmine peered over the handle bars keeping her mama safely tucked in bed. She couldn’t see her Mama’s face good so she pulled the chair to the ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Time.

    The shortest lifespan Is not that of the Fly; It's the Second Who must live so briefly. Flash by for a moment (Even shorter, I mean) An instant (perhaps) Stepping ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drainpipe

    My dear, come in; wipe your muddy boots on our soft white carpet and throw your soaking coat on the floor. You see, I don’t think anyone’s going to notice ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I think of you

    When smiles aren't enough, And the truth is too rough, I think of you. When the sky is gray, And the sun runs away, I think of you. When time ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deadly Dream

    Pondering sleep of mine Around my waking body blackened vine The knife held in hand pulses with light Trying to carve my last night Glinting with a deadly glare Pressed ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Unsurprising

    People who knew Zoro were astonished by his ability to fall asleep. To his crewmates, it was an annoying quirk. They couldn’t fathom how a person could fall asleep within ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    I love you. I love how you laugh, how you talk, how you smile. Sometimes seeing all of it is the highlight of my day. I love how ropy your ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Time

    I think back to the days of when I loved you. Of when it was you who made my dreams come true. To the times you made me laugh, and ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Whispering tower

    The sun sat drooping slightly over the arid landscape. The earth was hard and sparsely vegetated; the imprint of hundreds of running feet from over the years was prominent. The ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Behind The Cloud Of Dreams

    Behind the cloud of dreams. There’s a smiling face. And on her moon like face, are streams of black silk flowing down her rosy cheeks. Behind the cloud of dreams. ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Discovery

    It's definitely touching in a way I guess. But, you could add more description, length, and overall topic. It is, very short for a short story, and this is a ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Pizza

    Part of why I liked this, is because I love pizza. I also liked it because it is very simple (in my mind, at least) and is very easy to ...

    Apr 12, 2011


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