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Hey, Cat! I noticed this only had one review, and I certainly think it deserves more than that! So here I have come to save the day! Hooray! “Lin! Oh, ...

I have arrived for the last review! Hooray! So let's get started! I shifted in my seat as I turned my attention to the TV screen. An orange woman smiled ...

Hello Dudette! Sorry it took me so long to get to this one. I've been immensely busy. But I've come at last! Anyhow, I was too lazy to read the ...

Hello Dudette! Thanks so much for requesting me for the reviews! Congratulations on winning the CIA contest, by the way. Well, let's get started, shall we? “That’ll be £2.30 then ...

Hello! This was a spontaneous review; I hadn't been planning on reviewing anything. But I really enjoyed your story and felt that I should put in my two cents! I ...

Hey, Jared! I don't have a whole lot to say, but we'll see how the review turns out, no? ____the procession drum, drum, drums on I, personally, think this would ...

Hello ClimberSquirrel! I've arrived to give you your second complimentary review for the February CIA contest! So let's get started, shall we? Reading through this, I'm quite amazed at the ...

Hey Ally! I'm here for the second of two complimentary reviews for the February CIA contest! I won't nitpick much, since Jen has appeared to have covered that, but I'll ...

Hey Conrad! I'm the second judge for the CIA contest, as I believe I told you a long time ago. Anyway, on with the review! I love the abruptness of ...

Here I am, the second judge for the CIA contest! Anyway, I'll proceed. I didn't find many mistakes except for maybe a misplaced comma here and there. But I won't ...

I have arrived with the second complimentary critique that you get for entering the February 2009 CIA contest! So let's get started, shall we? As he walked out of the ...

Hey, Rosey! I'm the guest judge for the February 2009 CIA contest! This is the first complimentary critique out of two that comes along with entering the contest. The other ...

Eee! *eats cookies* Now. Onto the review. This was an awesome way to start the novel, methinks. And it is nowhere near as bad as you seem to think it ...

Hey Kelly! I'm here, just as I promised! I'm going to go through all the mistakes here first, before I get into the overall review. Not once had it been ...

Yay, chapter 4! So, I'm sure you don't want too many nitpicks, but I still have a few to bring up. For instance, you do a lot of the "T-talking ...