BitterRosemary

No problem!! Thanx so much!!

Hey there! BitterRosemary here, just for a comment this time. I remember when you wrote this, and showed me the first time. I almost cried then and I almost cried ...

TS Thanx so much for your kind review! The end was my favorite part too. The boy that this poem is about is exactly as you described, emotional, but confident. ...

Thanx for the feedback. As for the stanzas, es everybody keeps telling me how to do the spaces but for some reason my computer just wont let me, so I'm ...

Thanx blue, yes that helps. I might've written this at 4am, so it was more of a get-my-feelings-out-there sort of thing, so I was not trying to follow any literary ...

Your review always help!! Yes, I know tit's a fallout boy song, I learned it from you, but I couldn't resist putting it in. I'll change it though, cuz is ...

No problem, I totally understand alot of people don't like capitalizing the first letter. :) It was good nonetheless. :)

Thanx purple that does help! This is the first poem I've written with in such a restrictive style, so thanx for the tips.

Thank you that means alot to me

No problem :)

Thanks much LGF. I do appreciate your feedback, but when writing this style ( a sestina), you are required to keep with the same six ed words in a particular ...

Thanks! I actually tried to use spaces, but I'm convinced my computer hates me, so It kept reverting back to the original format.

Thank you!! I really appreciate it. As for the word "Magic", I chose to use it becauseit worked well in the first two stanzas. However, when writing a sestina you ...

Thanks so much for your kind review! The lyrics "You saw me for who I am, stared into my soul" refer to the boy that knows you s well, he ...

Beautiful. As always. I wish I could write like this. Never stop!