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Re: So there was this chihuahua...
Here's BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Let's get started!!! LOL this is brilliant. Sometimes you just feel the need to write about random things and thats OK. Songs ...
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Re: Four Years Ago
Hey! BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Let's get started! First. This is truly a beautiful song. I can literally see the lonely person sitting on the couch swiggin ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: him
Hey this is BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Let's get started! I think this is an excellent poem. It's true, and it's deep, and it's connectable. Constructive cristicism. ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Say Something
Hi! BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Let's get started. First off, this is an absolutely incredible piece. It pretty much sums up that feeling we've all had at ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Just Wasting Time
Hey! BitterRosemary here to give a review! Let's get started! "Let’s get out of here, Feel the sun on our faces, And throw away all those, Chains and restraints, That ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Letters
Hey there! This is BitterRosemary here to give you a review!! Let's get started! This is a simple, yet profound poem. Such a simple message, such an earnest plea, you ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: clock
Hey! This is BitterRosemary to give you what I hope is a helpful review. Honeslty, I am in love with this poem. It is beautiful in every sense of the ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Lame Game Boy
Hey there! BitterRosemary here to give a review! LOL nice. I think the limerick is nicely laid out (as most limericks are). No superfluous language, nice and simple. Thanks for ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 23 (Revised)
HI! BitterRosemary here again. I am still in love with your stories. They are magical, and posses all the true qualities of a bestseller. This story in articular was epic ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Chapters 1 The Token (Please review! Plan on publishing so need it)
Hey there! BitterRosemary giving you what I hope is a helpful review. I want to start f by saying that this is by all means a good review. However, I ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: America's Cup Here We Come Chapt. 3
Hey there! It's BitterRosemary here to give you a review. I hate to give you a negative review, but i feel like it is necessary. yes, this piece is encouraging ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: The Stone Bridge to Solitude
Hey! BtterRosemary here to give a review! Let's get started! What I did like: Beautiful, yes. Imaginative, yes. Told a great story. Beautiful ajectives. What I didn't like: However it ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: According To... Chapter 1: Glassy Memories (Allana)
Hey!~ This is BitterRosemary to give you a review. BRILLIANT. Not a completely unique idea, but fun all the same. I like that you shifted the focus not only on ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 24 (Revised)
Hey! BitterRosemary here to give a review. Let's get started. So, first you should know that this s my first time reading one of your chapters. You should also know ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Fly
Hey! It's BitterRosemary here to give you a review. GORGEOUS. This is incredible. Simple, yet it has a flow behind it that makes it seem like it really has emotion ...
Mar 15, 2014
