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Re: Ordadus [2.1]
Hey there Wolfical. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. I'm just trying to jump into this novel from the middle of nowhere, so hopefully ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 13 - Karma is a bitch (Russ's POV)
Hey there papillote. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. I've actually been following your novel off and on for a bit, still meaning to ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Puntertainment Ch. 1 (CW Flash)
Hey there voiceofdragons. Birdman stopping by to help rescue your work from the green room. There's a few particulars to deal with before I get into actual content. You need ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: BlackLagomorph Character art
Hey there KayB. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. I think that you might want to go more in the direction of doing an ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Expectations
Hey there Eros. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. First off, even as free verse, this doesn't work as a poem. It follows this ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: The Memories Tattooed On His Skin (MTOHS) - Chapter 1.1 OLD
Hey there SpiritedWolfe. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. Finally a novel that I'm able to pick up from the green room, right at ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Procrastination.
Hey there moonlitwriter1108. Birdman stopping by to help rescue your piece from the green room. 1. Considering you said it once within the piece and also because of the format ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Alyssa Stewart and the Mystery of the Scarlet Orb: Chapter Three: Vorshevky--the"Know-it-all"
Hey there Aritra. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the back of the green room. 1. The previous reviewer focused more on your characters and your detail, ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Pain and Joy
Hey there Thisislegacy. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. Repetition The repeated line start of "I am...", is the focus of your poem and ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: Emily
Hey there lolosboing. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. First Line, First Read, First Thoughts 1. The first thing I saw before I even ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (1.1)
Hey there Carlito. Went way back just to read these chapters for reference but decided to type out a quick review for each one. I know you already have so ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: Lief.
Hey there KaraStevens. Birdman dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. Plot The ending was somewhat easy to predict, even though I didn't know exactly how ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: Wonderland
Hey there JuneIparis. Birdman here, dropping by to help rescue your work from the green room. Flow and Rhyme 1. One of the main aspects of your poem is this ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (9.1)
Hey there Carlito. Birdman stopping by to rescue your work from the green room. I haven't read any of the previous chapters of your fair novel so apologies if I ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: Is that Music (Blackout Poem 2)
Hey there myjaspercat. Birdman here, just stopping by to rescue your work from the green room. It's been awhile since I have flown in the poetry world but I don't ...
May 21, 2017
