Biluata

Hi there, outvaders. This is Luata, here for a review. Welcome to YWS and it is my pleasure to give you your first review! I'll divide my review into overall ...

Hello there Spartan118. Luata here for a review. Because you are the author and I am not, feel free to take any advice or ignore any advice, whichever you think ...

Hello. Luata here for a review. Admittedly, it has been forever since I've reviewed anything, so you are the first from a long period of inactivity. Let me know if ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review, though admittedly, I haven't done anything for a while so I'm a bit rusty, though I'll try to be as helpful as possible! ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review. Quite honesty, I haven't reviewed anything in quite a while so I'm a bit rusty. Just to explain to you my process, I ...

Good day to you! Luata here for a review, first things first though, I apologize if this review seems overly harsh or to nit-picky or anything, I would like to ...

ARK!! It's been so long! Anyhow, Luata here to review your work. First off, I have to tell you this is my first review of the day so I'm a ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review. I haven't reviewed a chapter work yet, so here we go. This review is purely suggestions, if you don't like what I have ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review! Third review of the day, so I'm finally getting warmed up! Anyhow, that was a very cheerful welcome for a rather grim work. ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review! What a wonderfully unappreciated work! Ohmygoodness, just ... it's great. I can't really nitpick it all that much, the opinion you present it ...

Hello there! Luata here for the first review I'm doing this lovely morning. It's rather dreary where I live though, all clouds and no sunshine! Anyhow, I like the format ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review! I agree with SereneSimpliciT on her comment that this is a really, really nice piece and I applaud you for that. But of ...

Hello there, Luata here for a "kinda" review. I call it a kinda review because I really don't know how to review a summary... but here I am, so I'll ...

Hello there, Luata here for the first review of this work. As I've said before in the beginning of most of my reviews, I'm not an expert so everything here ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review. Now, not being a poetry expert, the entire review is mostly suggestions, so you can take or leave them as you want. Also, ...