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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Josephsdotter

    Kylan, Guess what? You won't believe it. Neither do I, but it's happening. I understand this poem. I know, right? It's crazy. I can't believe it! With that aside... This ...

    Jun 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Wicked Wishes

    Hey, Jon. Like the person above me, to fully get into detail about this poem, I'll split it up into stanzas and we'll go from there. Coming to see me ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mayflower [1]

    June! I love you. You're freaking awesome. Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou. I love reading good, solid prose like this. This wasn't that hard to read, like a few other stories I have reviewed ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Beowulf Project Part 1

    Hey Scribe! About halfway through this piece, I began to pick on something quite unexpected, and quite plesant. But not at the same time. In fact, I really don't know ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...

    Pork, He thought briefly that they should've called the ride the Long Intestine, I know, right? Cause you enter through the mouth and come out the anus! His foot hit ...

    May 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the beekeeper

    Kylan, This one was a little too complicated for my taste. I found it extremely hard to link anything together, really. A lot of the stanzas were so different that ...

    May 21, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...

    Pork, This was great. Not only is it great, but it's original. Jeez, you just wrote about 2000 words about a story of two brothers who are standing in line ...

    May 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: darling

    Kylan, I really, really like your poetry. I think it was you that told me that you don't have to understand poetry to love it. So I've been reading lots ...

    May 13, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hand

    Kamas, So, you've had some pretty great reviews, and you're lucky to have gotten so many! I don't have a lot to add, other than one of lines doesn't work ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Southern Fire

    Galerius, One of the main reasons I don't care for poetry that much is because I can never understand anything. I did talk to some of my poet friends, and ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Struck Sightless- prologue

    Hey, there! I'm Jared. As countless others have said before, you can really write. I don't say this to everyone, and when I do, it should be taken seriously. You ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Summer's Music

    Peanut, This is very beautiful, but there is one major drawback. The commas. You can get rid of every single one. Please, get rid of them. They detract from the ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Lesson in Dying

    SNOINK SUCKS. Anyway. I get really violent feelings when I read this poem, and nothing more. I don't really take anything away from this short of piece. There were only ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Silken Chants

    Jon, This is really strange. I can't quite grasp what you're trying to convey in this poem. You may think it works, but it really doesn't. The rhyming, man. It's ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: .

    Rosey, I've been away from poetry for so long, it feels weird to get back into the habit of reviewing, but nevertheless, I shall do my best! That rhymed. Sort ...

    May 10, 2009


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