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Hi, ofir, here's your review as requested. The realm All right, you've got a wee bit of a problem from the get-go. The title should actually be written "The Realm", ...

Hi, Rosey, here's your review as requested. ^^ Only fairy-tales end that way, and my story is no fairy-tale. Minor nitpick, but "fairy tale" is two separate words, no need ...

Hi, taytay, I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned I will get incredibly nitpicky, and I'll point out phrasings that trouble me even if I have no suggestions on ...

Now, you're not being fair. When you post your works on a public forum , for critique, that means that you're accepting any sort of critique that comes your way. ...

It's me again! Let's see how in-depth I can make this since I'm operating under a time limit of sorts... Jasti's hands remained on Haraan's shoulders as a way of ...

Here I am, on the first chapter. ^^ Since I haven't looked at the other reviews, if I'm bringing up points that have already been trod on, feel free to ...

Hi, skjold, I'll be your reviewer for today. ^^ Since this piece is so long, I'm going to only leave my impressions on the first part. Also, though I tend ...

Hi, Shina, I'm here with a review. ^^ I actually had one halfway typed up, but my internet conked out on I probably won't go as in-depth as I usually ...

Hi, blackpencil, I'll be your reviewer today. ^^ The raging of a magnificent battle echoed throughout the jagged peaks of the Catarach Mountains. For a first sentence, this is horribly ...

Well, I'm criminally late. I really have no excuse. Feel free to tie me to a tree and shoot me until there's nothing left to shoot. This is a very ...

Hi, octo, I'll be your reviewer today. ^^ In the court of the great ruler of the Middle Kingdom, a young woman danced, entrancing all those around her. First off, ...

Antigone stole the words out of my...keyboard. XD The death scene at the end is simply chilling and horrible, but brilliant. A wonderful book through and through. It's been a ...

It's about time I get tho this. :) Hundreds of sharp spires rose from the depths, some in uneven pairs or trios, some with terraces providing security from the yawning ...

Hi, Master_Yoda, I've actually been meaning to review this work for a long, long time but never got around to doing it until now. ^^ I haven't read the other ...

Hi, playerj09, here's your review as requested. The Streets of New York were flooded with the bodies of Millions of former inhabitants. "streets" and "millions" should not be capitalized. The ...