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Hi, ofir, I'm back. ^^ If my last review hasn't completely scared you away... I'll try to be less nitpicky because I think you're already aware of the basic issues ...

Hi, ofir, here's your review as requested. The realm All right, you've got a wee bit of a problem from the get-go. The title should actually be written "The Realm", ...

Hi, Rosey, here's your review as requested. ^^ Only fairy-tales end that way, and my story is no fairy-tale. Minor nitpick, but "fairy tale" is two separate words, no need ...

Hi, taytay, I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned I will get incredibly nitpicky, and I'll point out phrasings that trouble me even if I have no suggestions on ...

Now, you're not being fair. When you post your works on a public forum , for critique, that means that you're accepting any sort of critique that comes your way. ...

It's me again! Let's see how in-depth I can make this since I'm operating under a time limit of sorts... Jasti's hands remained on Haraan's shoulders as a way of ...

Here I am, on the first chapter. ^^ Since I haven't looked at the other reviews, if I'm bringing up points that have already been trod on, feel free to ...

Hi, skjold, I'll be your reviewer for today. ^^ Since this piece is so long, I'm going to only leave my impressions on the first part. Also, though I tend ...

Hi, Shina, I'm here with a review. ^^ I actually had one halfway typed up, but my internet conked out on I probably won't go as in-depth as I usually ...

Hi, blackpencil, I'll be your reviewer today. ^^ The raging of a magnificent battle echoed throughout the jagged peaks of the Catarach Mountains. For a first sentence, this is horribly ...

Well, I'm criminally late. I really have no excuse. Feel free to tie me to a tree and shoot me until there's nothing left to shoot. This is a very ...

I'm back for another review. ^^ I'll try not to get so nitpicky this time, since I think you're already aware of most of the basic prose-level issues here. His ...

Hi, octo, I'll be your reviewer today. ^^ In the court of the great ruler of the Middle Kingdom, a young woman danced, entrancing all those around her. First off, ...

Hi, blaster219, it's me again. This will be my first review as an Instructor, so I'll try making it as in-depth as possible. So, he had been forced to fly ...

Antigone stole the words out of my...keyboard. XD The death scene at the end is simply chilling and horrible, but brilliant. A wonderful book through and through. It's been a ...