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Thanks for the advice, I appreciate it. I realized myself that it was short for a first chapter, therefore I was going more for the Prologue style beginning.

Hi there, CarbonCore. :) This poem is amazing. I especially liked the way you mixed things up. Sounds complex and it's catching. Great work! Keep it up. -Bianca

Hey Sam... thanks a lot! :) Well, the crash was heard in the back, so yes, a car hits them.

Hi there! Your poem expresses great ideas. I like the mystery it revolves around. It could have been worked with more, but for the small word usage, it's good! :) ...

Hey there, GeeLyria! :) Great poem. I really like the idea. You could have expanded it and continued the thought, but overall, it's good! Keep it up!! - Bianca

Hi there, StoryWeaver! :) I like your poetry piece, quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it. And love your use of words. Great work!! Don't forget that in a poem, each ...

Hi Aria! Your story is amazingly interesting. I love your use of words and the mystery they bring. I tried writing a fictional piece on lords and kingdoms sometime ago, ...

Great story, Emily. I can't wait to read the rest! - Bianca

Hi umaima. :) I read this poetry piece and I must say it is quite good. I can relate to myself feeling the same way in the past. That is ...