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BethanyMarieWright

  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Final Breaths of Final Hate

    Hiya there, thanks for reviewing and all, but I feel like you entirely missed the point of my poem - but each to their own, I guess. This was a ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    I've got to admit, even if it were on it's own, that is a fantastic title.

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Untitled

    Because you're so nice about everything and so supportive, it's lovely :)

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Untitled

    You know what? You're my favourite type of reader. Thank you so much for your comments - and I happen to like my name too; that's why I chose it!

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Teen Fiction Re: Wasted, Broken, Gone

    Well, I only just read this. A little late, I know, but I was going through comments and I just found this. Thank you so, so much. That is super ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Other » Satire, Romantic Re: To My Ex

    This was great, thank you for uploading this

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Acrostic Poem #1

    I actually didnt even notice the 911. I just saw a 1, wow, unobservant points go to me

    Dec 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tell Me

    Thank you, and yes that's how it worked, first three was one half of the couple, and the last was the other.

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tell Me

    Thank you for the review! I chose not to make it longer because I can't stand walking into a billion stanza poem and I don't want to make others go ...

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Final Breaths of Final Hate

    Thank you for reviewing, but I would say it's pretty obvious that there's no punctuation for a reason. If I hadn't thought to put a single piece of punctuation in, ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages

    I do see that, I definitely do, and I really think this is a fantastic piece, I just thought that the change came quite sudden. Maybe it needs to be ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages

    I went through re-reading it, and I thought that maybe it's not the strongest part of the work. I'd say that it suddenly took this turn, this dark turn, and ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Our Little Fairytale

    I'm not going to comment on a lot of this, seeing as it - although very thorough - entirely missed the point of my work. I am going to say ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Our Little Fairytale

    Thank you very much, I wrote that story about three months ago, and have been going through, editing and rewriting for such a long time. And, I think I almost ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Our Little Fairytale

    Awe, thank you so much. And yes, that's actually the one bit I've been on the edge about. (The Spider-Man poster is at the end of my bed, he he ...

    Dec 11, 2013


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