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BethanyMarieWright

  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Final Breaths of Final Hate

    Hiya there, thanks for reviewing and all, but I feel like you entirely missed the point of my poem - but each to their own, I guess. This was a ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: I flow on as I sing this song

    I've got to admit, even if it were on it's own, that is a fantastic title.

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Untitled

    Because you're so nice about everything and so supportive, it's lovely :)

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Untitled

    You know what? You're my favourite type of reader. Thank you so much for your comments - and I happen to like my name too; that's why I chose it!

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Teen Fiction Re: Wasted, Broken, Gone

    Well, I only just read this. A little late, I know, but I was going through comments and I just found this. Thank you so, so much. That is super ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Other » Satire, Romantic Re: To My Ex

    This was great, thank you for uploading this

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Acrostic Poem #1

    I actually didnt even notice the 911. I just saw a 1, wow, unobservant points go to me

    Dec 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tell Me

    Thank you, and yes that's how it worked, first three was one half of the couple, and the last was the other.

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tell Me

    Thank you for the review! I chose not to make it longer because I can't stand walking into a billion stanza poem and I don't want to make others go ...

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Final Breaths of Final Hate

    Thank you for reviewing, but I would say it's pretty obvious that there's no punctuation for a reason. If I hadn't thought to put a single piece of punctuation in, ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages

    I do see that, I definitely do, and I really think this is a fantastic piece, I just thought that the change came quite sudden. Maybe it needs to be ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages

    I went through re-reading it, and I thought that maybe it's not the strongest part of the work. I'd say that it suddenly took this turn, this dark turn, and ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Our Little Fairytale

    I'm not going to comment on a lot of this, seeing as it - although very thorough - entirely missed the point of my work. I am going to say ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Our Little Fairytale

    Thank you very much, I wrote that story about three months ago, and have been going through, editing and rewriting for such a long time. And, I think I almost ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Our Little Fairytale

    Awe, thank you so much. And yes, that's actually the one bit I've been on the edge about. (The Spider-Man poster is at the end of my bed, he he ...

    Dec 11, 2013


You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott