Bellator

I thought this was beautiful. It was especially clever how you shifted the words only slightly to create a totally different meaning.

Maybe I'm actually a dude... Who knows?

Thanks for the review! I'm glad it wasn't too boring.

@icannotherethings- If you see this, please don't comment on paragraph 3. It would be kind of awkward. Also, I didn't mean to say, "yawn down the stairs," That was a ...

Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind in the future.

Oh my god. I cannot even express how much I love these. So beautiful.

Oh. And sense is made.

Wow. This is a stunning piece. I've read many works about depression, but nothing as moving as this.

Wow. This was really well written. Some parts I don't really understand, but that just adds to the cryptic and mysterious tone of it. The whole poem shines with an ...

Hey! My username is Latin too! Such a great language.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to correct that in the future.

Ooh, this is a good one, Shady! Introducing a favorite child adds another layer of complexity to the story. It leaves me wondering if Fania will be an antagonist, a ...

Wow, this is really well-written. Good job!

Dis wuz purty gud. I likd da parte were u speld stuf rong.

Wow, this was really good. I liked how you sort of rhymed, but didn't stick to a specific pattern. I don't normally review poetry, but I thought this was very ...