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She's intelligent, so I think she figured it out from Doc's "genes" comment. It was meant to imply he'd seen Sara, to know they looked similar. Thanks for the review. ...

Thanks for this, Timmy. You've given me a lot to think about.

I was saying pay attention to the genes thing. The implication was that he'd had direct contact with Sara, and knew that she was a lot like Layla. Sorry if ...

I respect your choice, but characters need depth and human qualities. The response to your work is our empathy with them. Writers make us feel ! I can see this ...

Okay, phrasing... The"where have you been" thing sort of means "have you been paying attention? Are we even talking about the same thing?" That's what it was there for. As ...

You might want to read from the beginning, but thank you :) Just that you might benefit from some context on this.

I'm wondering if you guys like this version of the chapter better than the last one...

The secret is just how much control he has over her.

All I can say is wait for the next chapter. Oh, it is coming to a head! Some of your questions will be answered... Thanks for the review! PS. You ...

Just one more, yes :) Nice to hear some new comments! I included the moment with the fronds for no particular reason. It's just something I would do.

Sorry about the triple post XD

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Hey, jumpingsheep! You asked for a review on this, so here I am (sorry about the wait, by the way). I have read all the chapters in order, and I'm ...

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Hey, jumpingsheep! You asked for a review on this, so here I am (sorry about the wait, by the way). I have read all the chapters in order, and I'm ...

If it's this dialogue heavy, perhaps re-class it as a script? It was good otherwise.

Thanks for the reviews! See you next chapter