BelarusBirdy

Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh!!!! SAD!! But still really good. I liked how you never really said what the Test was until the end, but it ...

I think it should be a short story.

I was not expecting the ending.

The last line is a question, isn't it? anyways, great poem. I can relate to it. *hits like button* Anyways, very good. And very meaningful.

I'm gonna point one thing out. In your spoiler, it says Goodgle. I'm assuming you meant Google? Anyways, more great work from Tally-wa! Keep Writing, Bel

I love the last line!

I like the edited version! I command you to make a third one!! IMMEDIATELY!!!!!

More good work Tally! I might come back and get some of the small things later, but I'm working on my novel right now.

I added to it, if you're interested.

Yeah. I plan to make it long, and thanks for the advice. I'm nothing if not stubborn and determined, and having a book published has been a dream since I ...

Sorry, this review isnn't going to be much help. I really liked your poem, and I want to hear more! Keep Writing, Bel

I agree. Breaking it up into paragraphs would make it both look better and be easier to read. Also, great emotion shown here. Keep writing, Bel

This is really good! The description bottle blond is good imagery! Keep writing, Bel

This is a stunningly beautiful piece. It's eloquent and sweet and I started crying while I was reading it. (Not that that's unusual at all...) Keep writing!

This is a really haunting piece. That's what I thought. That being said, I have really strange taste. As soon as I finish typing this, I'm going to like your ...