BeeTeaDubs525

Wow! That is such a compliment. I absolutely love the way you perceived this poem. I love how a poem can mean so many different things to people. To me, ...

Thankyou for the wonderful feedback!

Awesome feedback. I really appreciate it. I previously had stanzas and changed it, I reverted it back and seem to prefer it as well. The line %u201Cwill he ever understand ...

Hi there! Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback. I have done some tweaking in regards to the punctuation. Upon further deliberating, I decided to add punctuation to get ...

Thank you for taking a moment to leave some feedback! I have done an edit to correct my apostrophe errors. I let that slip right by me. When writing this ...

I feel like this poem has been well received! I spent a long while deliberating the proper words to maintain a good structure. I love the term %u2018ironic celebration%u2019. That ...

I really love how you convey a feeling of being trapped and stuck. Feeling misunderstood even after you “screamed” at the top of your lungs how you felt, and why ...

I really love how you convey a feeling of being trapped and stuck. Feeling misunderstood even after you “screamed” at the top of your lungs how you felt, and why ...

Thank you. I%u2019m glad to hear you found the word choices powerful, as that was something I was definitely attempting to convey!

Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts on this! This was written as one of my first poems. I ignored punctuation in hopes that it ...

I feel your hurt while reading this. The pain of a relationship that is going nowhere and not meant to be. Your honesty and loyalty sounds unrequited. The ending, to ...