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Re: Spiraling Staircase
Hey StoryWeaver! Wow. well it's been a while since I've reviewed anything but here it goes! Oh, and my interpretation of this poem may be COMPLETELY different from what you ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Victorian Bushires, 2009
Hey, Writing a poem about the fires was a great thing to do. I went through these fires and witnessed them first hand so I can tell everyone who is ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: The Neverending Love Song
Hey, I'm not really critiquing here. Just wondering in your first line "From the very moment my eyes fell upon you, alone on sandy beach" did you mean Sandy beach ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Controversial
Hey! I liked this poem. I do, however, agree with Spring grain with the first line "controversial is for the brave". It should be Controversy but in doing that you ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 15
Hey there, I just finished reading ALL of the chapters and I have to say... WOW!! I absolutely loved it!! I agree that the romance hasn't really been all that ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 9
Wow!! I'm in love with this story!! Is William in love with Maxine? Is that why he can never love Elizabeth? Ooh so many questions!! Does Edward secretly love Elizabeth? ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 8
Hey there, I LOVE THIS STORY!! But i hate cliffhanger endings. Damn, looks like I'm going to have to read the next one right now. Oh where has the day ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 2
Hey there, Wow! I've just finished reading the first two parts to this and I am LOVING it!! I always have been a sucker for historical romance hehe! The only ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Slip, Part 1 EDIT
Hey there, I really liked this. It has the potential to be something great. I haven't read the Shadow Children series so I wouldn't know if the were similar or ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Lost With You
Hey there, First off, Welcome to YWS. It's 1.15 in the morning where I am at the moment so I'm going to make this short sorry. I like these lyrics ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Lighthouse - Prologue
Hey there, I'd like to start by saying overall this was a good piece. There are a couple of things that need fixing up but it is a good story. ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: You Say Christmas, I say Xmas
Hey there, I really liked this piece. It was easy to read and just enjoyable. There is one or two things that bug me though. Breathtaking, laced, white snowflakes, merry, ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Sorry dad
This is a nice, simple, short poem. It flowed pretty well but there is one thing that bugged me a little. I'm sorry dad that i couldn't be, all that ...
Dec 22, 2008