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I like the concept of the story and comparing being physically cripple and mentally. I like the message she gives to the reporter You want to write but you can't, ...

Thank you for catching that small detail about the owl, it totally makes sense to say, "A shadow glided thorough the trees...". I'm glad you liked it, I'm experimenting with ...

Thanks for the pointers and opinions, really appreciate it! I want to keep that humorous batter energy going so thanks for pointing it out. I'm glad you liked the story!

Ah, yes, thank you for that little catch [piquing]! Thank you for the encouragement, I am interested in writing another scene with these two. I'm glad my characters have some ...

Thank you for the review! I made the appropriate changes, and thank you for helping me with the awkward sentences! I tend to think faster than I can type. Everything ...

Yes, I quite like reading and writing stories were the reader decides what/how it means to them. It's humorous to think that you weren't really sure about the characters, but ...

Hi vannilawriter! This was a very interesting narrative, I could see this being a short play with two people, one being the speaker and the other being Nothing. At first, ...

Okay, a ribbon, great! That would make sense, it just wasn't clear to me. I would love to help! Obviously, I am no expert but if you want to learn ...

Yup! Got it! Thanks!

Thank you for your review! Yes, I wanted to try and see if it would work for me to write both in first and third person, but I wouldn't mind ...

Thanks for the review! I totally agree with you about how easily she told him about her depression. I know friends who deal with it and a half would use ...

Yes, it was a predictable ending and I wanted to change up the story line. I'm glad you liked the happier version! What are you thoughts on the last paragraph? ...

Thank you for picking those out for me, I really liked your suggestions! Stay tuned for Version 3!

Beautiful poem! Love the imagery and you can tell that she is no princess! Great job!

Just figuring out how to use the quote code. This will make my reviews look a WHOLE lot cleaner!