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Beatrice

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Love Has Driven Me!

    Love has driven me, you and everyone from who we used to be to someone who we never knew we could ever be. And being without that one person and ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Memoirs Of Heart Sorrow

    Hey, again me to review. :-D Nice narration of how it feels being heart broken. Those sleepless nights lost into his/her memories, knowing that memories won't bring them back. Then, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Heartless Pleasure

    Nice one. But the second stanza could have been better. The endless and sensitive emotions you have tried to show is well expressed but beauty is lacked there. You know ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Imagine That

    You are 14? Are u really!? Oh my God. The poem is spellbounding. I could find no flaws. It was so beautiful and deep. The imagination you wrote down and ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Islands

    Its really a very sweet poem. However i feel you could have expressed it better. You know, it might have made it a little longer but would have been clearer ...

    Apr 25, 2015


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