BeTheChange

I liked the plot. It seemed original, and I do want to know what happens. But the writing needs work. First, there were a lot of typos and grammar problems. ...

Aw, this is cute! I noticed some typos, for example, the first sentence: It's should definitely be its. Also, in the paragraph about the orange, you use the word "juice" ...

Hmmm...interesting. The questions were prententious, for sure, and as ambiguous as the title states, but they didn't seem that random? Despite the aforementioned pretentiousness, the questions were ac

Wow! A sad and dark piece that manages to avoid heavy-handedness. It's engaging, it's vague about the situation without being incomprehensible, it's just awesome. I saw some grammatical errors. Most ...

This has some grammatical errors (run ons, one or two tense-switches, etc.), but overall, it made me feel all the feels! It's very realistic, showing both the good and bad ...

I've never read the trilogy you wrote about, but this makes me want to. I would complain about how I don't understand most of it, and about how I have ...

I like this very much. I've been reading a lot of poetry with similar themes lately, but this piece stands out. The italics at the end, signifying a shift from ...

Wow. WOW. I...I love this. I thought it was about a failed romance, but it's not, obviously. The metaphor throughout. The way you make cake and abuse, two unrelated things, ...

There were some typos. That's the first complaint I have. Also the only complaint, lol. Because this was good! I can see it as part of a children's book. I ...

This poem intrigued me, and is still intriguing me after I've finished it. I can infer that it's about an abusive/unhappy relationship, but beyond that, the theme is beyond me. ...

Good work! The story needs a little polishing, but overall, it held my attention despite being long. I liked how it showed that technology can be bad, but isn't always. ...

I don't have much experience with dyslexia (I actually believe that I have the opposite, hyperlexia), so I can't comment on the accuracy of the poem, but I like the ...

This was heartbreaking! If YWS had a star system, I'd give "the old things" five out of five. I liked the motif/parallelism/repetition/whatever you call it of "like it used to". ...

This was interesting. In a good way, that is. :) The only real problem I can see is that in a few instances, you use "it's" when you mean "its". ...

I love this. Everything about it. When I started reading, I thought this would be another over sensitive rant about how Disney is the bane of young girls, or maybe ...