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Baezel

  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, General Re: A Bleeding Dear Thing

    Hello, thank you for the review! I agree with you that this poem makes little sense; because I'm not planning on devoting myself to poetry, I haven't thought much about ...

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Science, General Re: Of Chickens in Italy

    Thank you, I need more practise in non-fiction. The "last time" sentence was a mistake on my half: I meant to say, "This would be her last time as a ...

    May 16, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Welcome Home - Chapter 3

    I never have and never will know anything about spanish, but gimme 10 mins to see if the english is good ;0

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Hungry Storms

    Thank you! It's fanfiction of "The Scorpio Races", and I wrote it as part of a little fandom festival thing. There's a few chapters more, for the prompts buuuut the ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: "Introduction" Book Review

    I don't understand?? This is a serious review! Bleeding fingers is a sign of a great author, yes.

    Mar 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Hungry Storms

    Thank you! This was originally written one of those fandom celebration things? If that makes sense? There were a few prompts to finish, which is why it's so confusing. I ...

    Mar 19, 2018
  • Other » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Gen-Exile Prologue:

    Hey, you have some damn awesome ideas. And stop apologising- I promise you this is great, so have some arrogance, even if it is an act (it'll become natural eventually) ...

    Mar 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: "Introduction" Book Review

    Hey! I'm trying to get back into this too! And thanks, I had a ridiculous amount of fun writing this because it was *so* stupid. But overall, nice icon.

    Mar 17, 2018
  • Other » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Gen-Exile Prologue:

    Heck! I forgot, I was going to recommend you read "A closed and common orbit" by Becky Chambers, it's a fave sci-fi book of mine, mostly because of it's amazing ...

    Mar 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: Robin's First Kiss

    Thank you! Not much of this story makes much sense, even with the added context at the end. It isn't part of a larger story, but the backstory to a ...

    Jan 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: fantasy test intro

    Alright pal, I see you've written another damn good piece which I can't get any review points for cause I can't find enough flaws. In fact, my only (1) issue ...

    Jan 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: cyberpunk test intro

    I want some points but I can't find enough flaws in this to make it a review. I literally only have the pettiest things: (I'm aware you can quote the ...

    Jan 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 1.1 - Argument

    Wait I just noticed the "1.1". This is part of a series. Which is why you pay attention the details, kids, so you don't write unnecessary crap.

    Jan 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Another Creation Myth -Unfinished

    Thank you! I plan on continuing it, though my plan admittedly hasn't got much further than that...

    Aug 29, 2016


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