BadNarrator

Hey. I'm gonna keep this concise. Things I liked: ¤The narration. I don't know if you realized this or not but there's a phrase professional writers use for your type ...

Howdy. So I'm more of a fiction oriented kinda guy, but I like this poem so I wanted to review it. Things I like: It's very minimalist. Like a Charles ...

So I'm doing a micro-review since I'm on my phone Things I liked: ¤The POV of the first section, while a little awkward at first, was the most descriptive and ...

I'm going to make a radical suggestion here and insist that you omit the first two paragraphs of this story. Just get rid of them. And before I tell you ...

I'm not sure I understand the purpose of this story. You stated "Calculus boy is the little flashing dot on your graphing calculators." That's an intriguing concept but I don't ...

I'm giving you a micro-review because I'm 3000 miles away from my computer right now. Feel free to ask me to elaborate if you need me to. Things this story ...

I don't have access to a computer so bear with me. And if it seems I've typed something nonsensical it's probably just my phone's swipe feature messing up. I'll do ...

I don't have access to a computer right now so I'm using my phone to post this review. Sorry in advance for any funky words I might use. Chalk it ...

I'm writing this review on my phone so bear with me. This is a very quiet poem, that utilizes the play between light and dark very well imo. My favorite ...

This poem kind of reminds me of Ginsberg's Supermarket in California. I think you started the poem off well with those first two lines. We are introduced immediately to the ...

I like the way this poem looks on a page and I like the concise, neat-little-package-feel you've got going on here. This may come off as a somewhat destructive idea, ...

Sorry in advance for the euphemisms, but given the nature of this story I think they'll be appropriate. It's been a while since I've done this, but I figure now's ...

I like this. you rely on your concrete images more than abstractions which is something a lot of young poets struggle with. few people in our age group seem to ...

there is a very strong sense of voice in this poem; that is to say there is only a sense of voice. I mean, the voice is well developed, the ...

you broke your heart again today cliche as you did yesterday, and the day before. contrite are you who lets lips swoon a bit sentimental, perhaps, but interesting words in ...